Saturday, June 28, 2008

Written five minutes ago.

Not sure yet if this is really one poem in three parts, or three poems that need their own titles. Thoughts?

1 comment:

GLensch said...

I think the last one should be the beginning of a prose piece, unless there are more. If there were more of these poems, it might be okay to end with one that is more prosey. I never know what to do with series. I think you have to decide if they need each other or if one would be stronger on its own.