Something is happening here, but you don't know what it is.
the four lane road with a yellow line through it where the drivers drive to fast and if you went through it
i like the assonance in seek and leaned as well as slip and nick.actually, the poem sounds quite lovely....but.... frankly, the most troubling/moving/affective bit of this is the title to the post.
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the four lane road with a yellow line through it where the drivers drive to fast and if you went through it
i like the assonance in seek and leaned as well as slip and nick.
actually, the poem sounds quite lovely....
but.... frankly, the most troubling/moving/affective bit of this is the title to the post.
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